What an effective example does
An example turns an abstract reason into a concrete situation and shows why it supports the point.
Task 2 support
Having an example does not mean the argument is developed.
Many body paragraphs include an example while the link between the example and the claim is missing.
Short answer: the example must show how it proves the claim; otherwise it is only inserted information.
The example is generic
The paragraph says many people or some countries, but gives no concrete situation or result.
Example disconnected from reason
The example appears, but does not explain how it supports the previous reasoning.
Invented figures
Invented statistics are used to sound evidence-based, which weakens trust.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
A more stable support chain
Write claim, reason, example, then consequence. The final step is often missing, which is why the paragraph feels thin.
- Claim: what I argue
- Reason: why it holds
- Example + consequence: how it proves the point
What to revise next
If examples exist but do not support the claim, revise one body paragraph and add the missing consequence sentence after each example.
FAQ
What problem does Task 2 examples solve?
Many body paragraphs include an example while the link between the example and the claim is missing.
What evidence should I check first for Task 2 examples?
The paragraph says many people or some countries, but gives no concrete situation or result.
What should I redo after reading Task 2 examples?
The example appears, but does not explain how it supports the previous reasoning. Write claim, reason, example, then consequence. The final step is often missing, which is why the paragraph feels thin.
Is Task 2 examples an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Task 2 development
Task 2 分数卡住常见原因是观点没有发展成完整论证链。了解薄展开为什么压分，以及下一步该重写哪个动作。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Linking mistakes
IELTS 写作的连贯来自信息按逻辑推进。机械使用 cohesive devices 反而会暴露段落关系不清。
Advantages
IELTS Task 2 advantages and disadvantages 题不能只列好处和坏处。先判断是否要求 outweigh，再用影响范围、严重程度、持续时间或受益群体建立评价尺度。检查主体段的理由、例子、结果与结论是否完成权重判断；最后把最薄弱的一段收窄成可验证的重写目标，并对照原文证据。
Advantages disadvantages questions
IELTS Task 2 advantages disadvantages questions 要分清题目要求讨论双方、判断是否 outweigh，还是说明趋势利弊。用严重程度、长期结果和受益群体建立比较尺度，避免各写浅观点。提交提纲或作文后，检查立场、段落权重和展开证据，并把最薄弱的一段转成可验证的重写目标。
Agree/disagree
IELTS Task 2 agree or disagree 题最常见的问题不是不会表达同意，而是立场范围不清，写到中途开始摇摆。
Start diagnosis
Turn examples into support, not decoration.
If every paragraph has examples but still feels underdeveloped, the issue is probably the link between example and reason.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
References