Common trap
Comparing employment, interest, and social status in separate paragraphs makes the essay drift.
- Whether comparison standard is fixed
- Whether labour market appears
- Whether personal choice is answered
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with memorising a model essay. First decide who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Without labour-market need, the advantage of vocational education is often vague.
Choose one standard: employment readiness, academic growth, public return, or personal choice.
Write one comparison frame: standard -> university strength -> vocational strength -> position.
Comparing employment, interest, and social status in separate paragraphs makes the essay drift.
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