Common trap
Listing build more roads and use buses without explaining who changes what behaviour.
- Whether actor is clear
- Whether behaviour change appears
- Whether result can be checked
Task 2 question guide
Traffic-congestion solution prompts need the actor clarified first.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with a model essay. First check who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Diagnostic evidence
If a solution lacks actor, mechanism, and expected result, the solution paragraph is weak.
What to ask while reading the prompt
Separate what governments, drivers, businesses, and planners can control.
What to revise after checking
Write one solution chain: actor -> policy/tool -> behaviour change -> congestion result.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
FAQ
What problem does Traffic congestion solutions solve?
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with a model essay. First check who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
What evidence should I check first for Traffic congestion solutions?
If a solution lacks actor, mechanism, and expected result, the solution paragraph is weak.
What should I redo after reading Traffic congestion solutions?
Separate what governments, drivers, businesses, and planners can control. Listing build more roads and use buses without explaining who changes what behaviour.
Is Traffic congestion solutions an AI essay checker?
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IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，而不是只改语法或替换高级词。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Transport topic
IELTS Task 2 transport topic 容易只写 more buses。先诊断公共交通、私家车、拥堵和政策结果链。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Urbanisation topic
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