Common trap
Listing build more roads and use buses without explaining who changes what behaviour.
- Whether actor is clear
- Whether behaviour change appears
- Whether result can be checked
Task 2 question guide
Traffic-congestion solution prompts need the actor clarified first.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with a model essay. First check who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Diagnostic evidence
If a solution lacks actor, mechanism, and expected result, the solution paragraph is weak.
What to ask while reading the prompt
Separate what governments, drivers, businesses, and planners can control.
What to revise after checking
Write one solution chain: actor -> policy/tool -> behaviour change -> congestion result.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Transport topic
IELTS Task 2 transport topic 容易只写 more buses。先诊断公共交通、私家车、拥堵和政策结果链。先诊断题目角度，再决定例子。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Urbanisation topic
IELTS Task 2 urbanisation topic 容易泛写 big cities。先诊断人口迁移、住房、就业和公共服务压力。
Traffic solution no actor
交通拥堵方案段常列措施但没有主体。先诊断谁执行、如何改变行为、结果是什么。这类草稿看似有观点，却缺少诊断证据。先诊断写作步骤，不要先找可背范文。
University vocational education
大学教育和职业教育题要诊断 labour market、personal development 和 public funding 标准。
Unpaid community service
Unpaid community service 题要诊断 compulsory service、student workload、community benefit 和 character education。
Four-day work week
四天工作制题要诊断 productivity、employee wellbeing、business cost 和 service coverage。
Start practising
Check the outline risk for this question first.
Submit your essay or outline and get one main blocker plus one revision target.
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