Pre-draft outline check
Body 1 may explain productivity gain, and Body 2 must handle job displacement, but both paragraphs should serve the same final position.
Task 2 question
For technology replacing jobs, first decide whether you argue net benefit or risk control.
This question often turns into one efficiency paragraph and one unemployment paragraph, leaving the position as both sides. Assign body-paragraph roles before drafting.
Keep a clear opinion alongside the discussion plan.
Common trap
Saying technology creates new jobs is not enough; name the jobs, skills, and transition cost.
Diagnostic evidence
If the ending position differs from the introduction, the issue is usually paragraph responsibility rather than language.
What to revise after checking
Rewrite the final sentence of the introduction and add one role sentence to each body paragraph: what this paragraph must prove.
- Whether the introduction has a clear position
- Whether body paragraphs serve one answer
- Whether job displacement is explained
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Technology topic
IELTS Task 2 technology topic 容易写成泛泛的 modern life。先诊断立场、对象和例子是否贴题。用自己的原文逐项检查，并把结论变成一次具体重写。
Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场从开头的同意或反对开始，再让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据，再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Technology unclear position
一个 technology essay 常见写作问题：当文章一边支持效率、一边担心失业时，先找立场和段落职责问题。Clear position 时好时坏：每段都像在回答不同问题。
Tourism local culture
Tourism and local culture 题目容易写成两边都有道理。先诊断收益对象、文化损耗和最终标准。检查重点：文化损耗是否具体、收益对象是否明确、判断标准是否一致。
Traffic congestion solutions
交通拥堵方案题要诊断 government action、driver behaviour、public transport 和 pricing policy。
University vocational education
大学教育和职业教育题要诊断 labour market、personal development 和 public funding 标准。
Start practising
Check position drift in this question type first.
Submit your technology replacing jobs essay and find the main blocker in position, paragraph role, or example.
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