Pre-draft outline check
Choose the investment object first: grid, subsidy, public transport electrification, or research. Different objects create different results.
Task 2 question
For renewable energy investment, explain how investment changes behaviour.
Many answers only say renewable energy is clean. A more scorable answer explains infrastructure, price, adoption, and pollution result.
A measure needs a mechanism; a correct direction is only the start.
Common trap
Saying governments should spend more money is weak if the essay leaves vague where the money goes.
Diagnostic evidence
If the transition between investment and less pollution is missing, development usually falls short.
What to revise after checking
Rewrite one solution paragraph with only one investment, then write cost change, adoption change, and emission result.
- Whether the investment target is specific
- Whether the mechanism is complete
- Whether the result returns to the environmental problem
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
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Environment topic
IELTS Task 2 environment topic 常卡在 government、individual、company 的责任还要拆清。先诊断责任链再重写。
Problem solution
IELTS Task 2 problem solution 题常见风险是问题写一套，方案写另一套。高质量答案需要问题和方案一一对应。问题和方案要成对出现。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估，观点数量是其次。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Rural to urban migration
农村到城市迁移题要诊断工作机会、公共服务和农村地区影响，不要只写 people move to cities。检查重点：迁移动机是否明确、城市压力是否具体、农村影响是否出现。
School uniforms students
学生校服题要诊断 equality、discipline、identity 和 student expression。先诊断题目，再写完整作文。
Scientific research funding
科研政府资助题要诊断 public benefit、private profit 和 long-term uncertainty。先做题目诊断，再写完整作文。
Start practising
Check the renewable-energy paragraph mechanism first.
Submit one renewable-energy essay and find the main blocker in measure, mechanism, or result.
References