Task 2 question

Remote-work essays need the employee-company trade-off, not only convenience.

This question often involves flexibility, team communication, management trust, and productivity. Only saying work from home is convenient stays thin.

A clearer trade-off makes the position more stable.

Diagnostic evidence

If the conclusion only says hybrid is best without criteria, the comparison standard is missing.

Pre-draft outline check

Choose a standard first: productivity, employee retention, team training, or work-life balance. Build each paragraph around one standard.

What to revise after checking

Rewrite the final line of the introduction and clearly support full remote, hybrid, or office-first work.

Real IELTS essay diagnosis

First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…

Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6

Main blocker

Body paragraph role is unclear

6–7conservative band range

268 words

Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.

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Common trap

One paragraph says employees are happier and another says companies are less efficient, without deciding which arrangement is better.

Whether the work arrangement is clear
Whether the comparison standard is fixed
Whether company and employee sides are handled

FAQ

What problem does Remote work flexibility solve?

This question often involves flexibility, team communication, management trust, and productivity. Only saying work from home is convenient stays thin.

What evidence should I check first for Remote work flexibility?

If the conclusion only says hybrid is best without criteria, the comparison standard is missing.

What should I redo after reading Remote work flexibility?

Choose a standard first: productivity, employee retention, team training, or work-life balance. Build each paragraph around one standard. One paragraph says employees are happier and another says companies are less efficient, without deciding which arrangement is better.

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