What to ask while reading the prompt
First decide whether the prompt asks about discipline, values, academic skills, or social behaviour.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with memorising a model essay. First decide who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Only writing parents know children best without explaining what schools do.
If family, school, and society are all responsible without division, the answer becomes vague.
First decide whether the prompt asks about discipline, values, academic skills, or social behaviour.
Write one responsibility chain: setting -> adult role -> child behaviour -> learning result.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit your Task 2 essay or outline and get one main blocker plus one revision target.