Common trap
Only saying online shopping is convenient without explaining why local shops are affected.
- Whether consumer motive is clear
- Whether shop impact is specific
- Whether community result returns to the prompt
Task 2 question guide
Online-shopping prompts need how convenience changes local shops.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with memorising a model essay. First decide who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Diagnostic evidence
Without consumers, small retailers, or delivery cost, business argument is thin.
What to ask while reading the prompt
First decide whether the prompt asks about convenience, employment, community life, or fair competition.
What to revise after checking
Write one consumer chain: platform feature -> buying habit -> shop revenue -> local result.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Business topic
IELTS Task 2 business topic 常涉及广告、企业责任和消费者选择。先诊断企业、政府和个人边界。先限定角度，再选例子。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Money topic
IELTS Task 2 money topic 容易从 happiness 写到 success 再写到 consumerism。先诊断立场和比较标准。
Advertising consumer spending
广告和消费题要诊断 consumer choice、social pressure 和 spending behaviour。只说广告操纵人，却没有写消费者为什么相信或模仿。
Overseas food local food
进口食物和本地食物题要诊断价格、环境、文化和供应稳定性之间的比较标准。把比较写成：标准 -> A 方证据 -> B 方限制 -> 立场。带着原文完成检查，再用重写验证是否真的改善。
Parents children education
父母和儿童教育题要诊断 family role、school role、discipline 和 learning support。先做题目诊断，再写完整作文。
Parents teaching responsibility
Parents teaching responsibility 题要诊断 family role、school role、child behaviour 和 social responsibility。
Start practising
Check the outline risk for this question first.
Submit your Task 2 essay or outline and get one main blocker plus one revision target.
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