Common trap
Only writing that apartments save space without addressing residents daily life.
- Whether housing pressure is specific
- Whether resident experience appears
- Whether the city result can be explained
This IELTS Task 2 question does not need a memorised model essay first. The key is what the prompt compares, who should act, and what result the body paragraph must prove.
Do outline diagnosis before writing the full essay.
If the essay talks only about the city and not residents, housing development is thin.
Ask whether the prompt cares more about land use, community, family life, or government planning.
Write one housing chain: limited land -> building choice -> resident experience -> city outcome.
Only writing that apartments save space without addressing residents daily life.
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