Common trap
Only saying government should control harmful content without defining limits.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with a model essay. First check who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Only saying government should control harmful content without defining limits.
If safety, privacy, and speech are mixed in one paragraph, position boundaries are unclear.
First decide whether the prompt asks about misinformation, crime, child protection, or personal freedom.
Write one regulation chain: risk -> rule -> enforcement limit -> rights cost.
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