What to ask while reading the prompt
First decide whether the prompt needs prevention, education, regulation, or consumer responsibility.
This IELTS Task 2 question does not need a memorised model essay first. The key is what the prompt compares, who should act, and what result the body paragraph must prove.
Do outline diagnosis before writing the full essay.
Only listing obesity and diabetes without responsibility or solution mechanism.
If one paragraph blames parents, schools, companies, and government, responsibility is confused.
First decide whether the prompt needs prevention, education, regulation, or consumer responsibility.
Write one health chain: food habit -> health risk -> responsible actor -> practical response.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit your Task 2 essay or outline and get one main blocker plus one revision target.