Common trap
Writing everyone should help as the conclusion without explaining who has which power.
Task 2 question guide
Climate-change responsibility prompts need what governments and individuals can each change.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with memorising a model essay. First decide who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Diagnostic evidence
If policy, industry, and household action sit in one paragraph, responsibility boundaries are unclear.
What to ask while reading the prompt
Separate action scale first: law, infrastructure, business regulation, daily habit.
What to revise after checking
Write one responsibility chain: actor -> tool -> behaviour change -> climate result.
- Whether the actor is clear
- Whether action scale matches
- Whether result is specific
FAQ
What problem does Climate change responsibility solve?
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with memorising a model essay. First decide who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Is Climate change responsibility an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Environment topic
IELTS Task 2 environment topic 常卡在 government、individual、company 责任没有拆清。先诊断责任链再重写。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Government topic
IELTS Task 2 government topic 容易写成 government should do more。先诊断政策目标、预算取舍和结果链。
Climate responsibility blur
示范 climate change essay 为什么 government 和 individuals 混写会削弱 Task Response。
Crime prevention education
Crime prevention through education 题目不能只写教育重要。先诊断 risk group、school action 和 behaviour change。
Fast food health
快餐健康题要诊断个人责任、政府政策和消费习惯，不要只写 unhealthy。
Free university education
Free university education 题目容易只写公平。先诊断 taxpayer cost、access 和 long-term return 是否服务同一个立场。
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