Common risk
Only saying cities are stressful lacks the cause-effect chain from urban condition to health result.
Task 2 question guide
City-health prompts need lifestyle and environment mechanisms separated.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then rewrite; repair one step before writing the next essay.
Diagnostic evidence
Without commute, air quality, housing density, or exercise access, examples become empty.
What to confirm before writing
First decide whether the prompt asks about physical health, mental health, government planning, or individual lifestyle.
What to revise after checking
Write one health chain: urban condition -> daily behaviour -> health outcome -> intervention.
- Whether health outcome is specific
- Whether urban factor is provable
- Whether intervention corresponds
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Urbanisation topic
IELTS Task 2 urbanisation topic 容易泛写 big cities。先诊断人口迁移、住房、就业和公共服务压力。
Health topic
IELTS Task 2 health topic 常见问题是把 lifestyle、tax、public health 混在一起。先诊断责任和证据。
Unhealthy food tax
不健康食品税题要诊断 price signal、consumer habit、fairness 和 health outcome。先做题目诊断，再写完整作文。
Climate change responsibility
气候变化政府和个人责任题要先诊断 action scale、policy power 和 personal behaviour。先做题目诊断，再写完整作文。
Crime prevention education
Crime prevention through education 题目不能只写教育重要。先诊断 risk group、school action 和 behaviour change。
Fast food health
快餐健康题要诊断个人责任、政府政策和消费习惯，不要只写 unhealthy。检查重点：责任主体是否明确、健康后果是否具体、措施是否有机制。
Start practising
Check the cause-effect chain for the city-health prompt.
Submit an outline and see whether lifestyle mechanism is concrete.
References