Common trap
Only writing competition builds character without age and intensity.
Task 2 question guide
Children competitive sports prompts need growth benefits and pressure risks separated.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with a model essay. First check who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Diagnostic evidence
Without coaching quality, parent pressure, or injury risk, the argument is incomplete.
What to ask while reading the prompt
First decide whether the prompt asks about teamwork, mental pressure, health, or school priorities.
What to revise after checking
Write one sports chain: activity type -> child response -> skill or pressure result.
- Whether age and intensity are clear
- Whether benefit can be proven
- Whether pressure risk is handled
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Children topic
IELTS Task 2 children topic 常把 children 写得太大。先诊断年龄段、责任主体和行为变化。年龄段决定原因和例子。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Sports topic
IELTS Task 2 sports topic 常把 health、school、money 混在一起。先诊断目标、受益人和例子支撑。
Sports funding schools
学校体育经费题要诊断教育目标、学生行为和预算取舍，而不是只写运动有益健康。如果主体段没有 classroom、discipline 或 teamwork，教育价值没有落地。
Children screen time
儿童屏幕时间题要诊断 education value、attention、health 和 parent responsibility。先做题目诊断，再写完整作文。
City congestion car use
城市拥堵和私家车题要先诊断限制政策、个人自由和可替代出行方式。检查重点：限制对象是否明确、替代方案是否真实、公平性是否处理。只说 ban cars，却不处理没有替代交通的人。
City life and health
City life and health 题要诊断 pollution、stress、sedentary lifestyle、public transport 和 urban planning。
Start practising
Check the outline risk for this question first.
Submit your essay or outline and get one main blocker plus one revision target.
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