Common trap
Only saying ads manipulate people without explaining why consumers believe or imitate them.
- Whether the advertising message is specific
- Whether consumer motive appears
- Whether social result returns to the prompt
This IELTS Task 2 question does not need a memorised model essay first. The key is what the prompt compares, who should act, and what result the body paragraph must prove.
Do outline diagnosis before writing the full essay.
Without status, convenience, or insecurity, the spending motive is unclear.
First decide whether the prompt asks about individual responsibility, business ethics, or consumer culture.
Write one advertising chain: message -> emotion/status -> purchase choice -> social result.
Only saying ads manipulate people without explaining why consumers believe or imitate them.
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