Common mismatch
The first paragraph may discuss lack of education, while the second only says government funding. Without a mechanism, the solution feels like another topic.
Problem solution
In a problem-solution essay, the solution must solve the problem you wrote.
Many essays describe a broad problem but give a generic solution. The reader cannot see why the solution addresses that specific problem.
Problems and solutions should appear as matched pairs.
Define the problem clearly
The problem cannot be only bad for society; explain who is affected and how.
The solution should be executable
The solution does not need to be perfect, but it should show how it reduces the cause or consequence.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to revise after checking
Add one sentence after each solution beginning because it addresses..., then check whether it truly connects to the problem.
- Whether the problem is specific
- Whether the solution matches the problem
- Whether the mechanism is clear
FAQ
What problem does Problem solution solve?
Many essays describe a broad problem but give a generic solution. The reader cannot see why the solution addresses that specific problem.
What evidence should I check first for Problem solution?
The problem cannot be only bad for society; explain who is affected and how.
What should I redo after reading Problem solution?
The solution does not need to be perfect, but it should show how it reduces the cause or consequence. Add one sentence after each solution beginning because it addresses..., then check whether it truly connects to the problem.
Is Problem solution an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
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These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心不是观点数量，而是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Idea development
IELTS Task 2 idea development 的卡点不是没有观点，而是 topic sentence 后缺少 reason、example 或 consequence。检查观点如何被解释、例子为何能证明它，以及结果怎样回扣题目。定位最薄弱的一环后，只重写段落并对照证据，验证展开是否从泛泛陈述变成完整论证。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起，才能支撑论证。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，而不是只改语法或替换高级词。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Problem solution questions
IELTS Task 2 problem solution questions 要检查 problem、cause、solution 与 actor 是否对应。避免描述现象后提出空泛口号；方案应说明谁执行、如何改变行为、解决哪个原因及结果。提交提纲或作文后，定位对应关系和证据缺口，再把它收窄成可验证的重写步骤。
Task 2 question types
IELTS Task 2 question types 要区分 opinion、discussion、problem solution 和 advantages disadvantages 的回答要求。
Start diagnosis
Check whether problems and solutions are paired.
Submit one Task 2 essay and find the main break in problem, solution, or development.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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