What the development chain is
A scorable body paragraph often has claim, reason, example, and consequence. Each step moves the previous sentence forward.
Idea development
Task 2 development is not adding more sentences; it is turning a point into an argument.
Many body paragraphs have a topic sentence and an example, but lack explanation. The reader needs to see why the example proves the point.
Add reason before example.
A point needs support
A point needs a reason after it; otherwise it is only an attitude.
Examples must prove the point
An example is not a list; it should make the reader believe the claim more.
What to revise after checking
Rewrite one body paragraph first. Do not change prompt or template; make the why and so what after the claim clear.
- Whether the claim is clear
- Whether the reason explains the claim
- Whether the example proves the reason
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
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Task 2 development
Task 2 想提分，常见的关键是把观点发展成完整论证链。了解薄展开为什么压分，以及下一步该改哪个动作。检查重点：先写 claim、再补为什么成立、再用例子或结果把它撑起来。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估，观点数量是其次。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起，才能支撑论证。例子出现了，还要说明它怎样支持前一句推理。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Task 2 intro
IELTS Task 2 introduction 比 paraphrase 题目多一步。它应该让读者看到回答方向、立场范围和文章接下来会怎么展开。
No ideas
IELTS Task 2 思路卡住时，先拆题目，观点库和万能素材往后放。先拆清题目命令词、讨论对象、冲突关系、责任主体和回答要求，再把任务分配成明确的主体段职责。用 who、why、how、result 追问生成可解释的理由与例子，并检查它们是否真正服务立场；最后把审题或展开中的主卡点转成一次段落重写步骤。
Opinion essay
IELTS Task 2 opinion essay 要先判断 agree/disagree 的程度、反方处理和主体段证明链。先诊断，再重写；先修一个步骤，再写下一篇。
Start practising
Diagnose the development chain in one body paragraph.
Submit one Task 2 essay and find the thinnest development step.
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