The conclusion should match the introduction
If the introduction partly agrees, the conclusion should not suddenly fully disagree. Check position consistency first.
Task 2 conclusion
A Task 2 conclusion should not make the essay drift at the end.
Many conclusions add a new example or recommendation to look complete. That can destabilize both Task Response and Coherence.
A conclusion closes the answer; it does not reopen development.
Restate the position
The reader should see the answer direction again, not a new direction.
Do not add a new argument
A new argument has no room to develop and often feels abrupt.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to revise after checking
Compress the conclusion into two sentences: one restates the answer, and one summarizes the relationship between the body paragraphs.
- Whether a new point appears
- Whether it matches the introduction
- Whether it closes the essay
FAQ
What problem does Task 2 conclusion solve?
Many conclusions add a new example or recommendation to look complete. That can destabilize both Task Response and Coherence.
What evidence should I check first for Task 2 conclusion?
The reader should see the answer direction again, not a new direction.
What should I redo after reading Task 2 conclusion?
A new argument has no room to develop and often feels abrupt. Compress the conclusion into two sentences: one restates the answer, and one summarizes the relationship between the body paragraphs.
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Task 2 intro
IELTS Task 2 introduction 不只是 paraphrase 题目。它应该让读者看到回答方向、立场范围和文章接下来会怎么展开。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心不是观点数量，而是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场不只是开头写同意或反对，还要让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据，再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，而不是只改语法或替换高级词。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Discuss both views
IELTS Task 2 discuss both views 题需要讨论双方并给出判断。只把两边观点各写一段，常常不够完整。
Discussion essay
IELTS Task 2 discussion essay 要先拆 both views、your opinion 和比较标准，避免只写一边。
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Check whether the conclusion weakens the position.
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