The conclusion should match the introduction
If the introduction partly agrees, the conclusion should stay at partly agree. Check position consistency first.
Many conclusions add a new example or recommendation to look complete. That can destabilize both Task Response and Coherence.
A conclusion closes the answer; it does not reopen development.
The reader should see the same answer direction again.
A new argument in the conclusion lacks room to develop and often feels abrupt.
If the introduction partly agrees, the conclusion should stay at partly agree. Check position consistency first.
Compress the conclusion into two sentences: one restates the answer, and one summarizes the relationship between the body paragraphs.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit one Task 2 essay and find the main issue in conclusion, position, or development.