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Task 2 conclusion

A Task 2 conclusion should pull the essay together at the end.

Many conclusions add a new example or recommendation to look complete. That can destabilize both Task Response and Coherence.

A conclusion closes the answer; it does not reopen development.

Restate the position

The reader should see the same answer direction again.

Sum up existing arguments only

A new argument in the conclusion lacks room to develop and often feels abrupt.

The conclusion should match the introduction

If the introduction partly agrees, the conclusion should stay at partly agree. Check position consistency first.

What to revise after checking

Compress the conclusion into two sentences: one restates the answer, and one summarizes the relationship between the body paragraphs.

  • Whether a new point appears
  • Whether it matches the introduction
  • Whether it closes the essay
Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

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Task 2 intro
IELTS Task 2 introduction 比 paraphrase 题目多一步。它应该让读者看到回答方向、立场范围和文章接下来会怎么展开。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场,并把观点展开到可以评估,观点数量是其次。先拆出题目要求与对象,再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条,把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标,并记录前后证据。
Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场从开头的同意或反对开始,再让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据,再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链,语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项,引用原文证据,再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写,比较修改前后是否更完整。
Discuss both views
IELTS Task 2 discuss both views 题需要讨论双方并给出判断。只把两边观点各写一段,常常还差一个判断。两边都要认真展开,你偏好的一边和另一边篇幅相当。
Discussion essay
IELTS Task 2 discussion essay 要先拆 both views、your opinion 和比较标准,避免只写一边。
Start practising

Check whether the conclusion weakens the position.

Submit one Task 2 essay and find the main issue in conclusion, position, or development.