Three common positions
Full agreement, full disagreement, and partial agreement can all work. The key is keeping the whole essay around that judgment.
Many responses say they agree but keep shifting through concessions. The reader cannot see the final judgment. Define the scope of agreement first.
The earlier the position is clear, the easier the development becomes.
A body paragraph may include concession, but it should not make the answer look changed.
If you partly agree, the two body paragraphs should explain the boundary, not fight each other.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Full agreement, full disagreement, and partial agreement can all work. The key is keeping the whole essay around that judgment.
revise only the introduction and two topic sentences first, then check whether the three sentences carry the same position.
Many responses say they agree but keep shifting through concessions. The reader cannot see the final judgment. Define the scope of agreement first.
A body paragraph may include concession, but it should not make the answer look changed.
If you partly agree, the two body paragraphs should explain the boundary, not fight each other. revise only the introduction and two topic sentences first, then check whether the three sentences carry the same position.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit one Task 2 essay and see whether position scope already limits Task Response.
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