What to confirm before writing
Find highest, lowest, largest change, shared trend, and clear outliers first.
Writing problem breakdown
Task 1 starts with the whole chart before details.
Break the problem into one blocker, one piece of diagnostic evidence, and one next revision target first. The smaller the problem, the more focused the rewrite becomes.
Make the problem smaller first so the rewrite can actually focus.
Common mistake
Reporting numbers in order makes the response read like a list and weakens the overview.
Diagnostic evidence
If the body has isolated numbers but no comparisons, Task Achievement is often unstable.
What to revise in the next version
Rewrite only the overview and two comparison sentences so every number has a purpose.
- Whether overview summarises the whole chart
- Whether data is selected
- Whether comparison objects are clear
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Chinese Task 1 overview
雅思小作文 overview 不是报最高最低。先概括全图趋势、最大差异和异常点，再决定哪些数字进主体段；适合 6.0–7.0 同学检查是否把总览写成了细节清单。
Task 1 data selection
IELTS Academic Task 1 数据选择决定报告是否真正回应图表。学习如何从折线图、柱状图、表格或饼图中识别主趋势、极值、交叉点和关键分组，先写有信息量的 overview，再用有限数据支持比较。结合常见漏选与逐点复述案例，检查自己的报告最该重写总览句、数据句还是段落分组，并验证是否改善。
Task 1 overview examples
IELTS Task 1 overview examples 的用途不是背固定句型，而是学习怎样从折线图、柱状图、表格、饼图或地图中筛选主趋势、极值、交叉点与整体变化。对比有信息量和空泛的总览句，检查自己的 overview 是否概括真正重要的关系，再决定下一版先重写趋势选择、比较结构还是数据支持，避免逐点复述图表。
How to write Task 2
雅思大作文怎么写的关键是先回答 agree、discuss、advantages 或 problem-solution 的命令词。先让问题变小，重写才会真的聚焦。
Chinese Task Response
雅思写作 Task Response 训练要先看回答范围、清楚立场、主体段展开和例子支撑。文章语言不错但分数上不去，常常是没有回答题目所有部分，或立场在主体段中变化。
Teacher correction
雅思作文老师批改应提供评分标准、原文证据和可执行的重写目标，避免只给笼统评价。先判断批改、修改、润色、评分器、老师批改、网课或卡分修复方案能不能给出可验证的诊断、证据和重写步骤。
Start practising
Use one real essay to find the main blocker.
Submit the prompt and essay, find the criterion that most affects the score, then decide which paragraph to rewrite.
References