Banfen Writing
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Writing problem breakdown

Writing self-study needs a blocker loop.

Break the problem into one blocker, one piece of diagnostic evidence, and one next revision target first. The smaller the problem, the more focused the rewrite becomes.

Make the problem smaller first so the rewrite can actually focus.

Diagnostic evidence

If every essay receives unrelated feedback without a long-term thread, the revision route becomes scattered.

What to confirm before writing

Create a blocker log: prompt, main blocker, evidence sentence, and revision target.

What to revise in the next version

Track only one or two blockers each week and verify through short repair tasks and rewriting.

Common mistake

Doing many prompts without review makes the same error repeat across topics.

  • Whether there is a blocker log
  • Whether same-prompt rewriting happens
  • Whether change is visible
Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南:小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍,大作文题型、立场与主体段展开,以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时,分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文,判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点,引用对应句段,再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改,才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
IELTS Writing feedback
雅思写作反馈要指出主卡分点、原文证据和重写目标。泛泛建议很难变成下一版重写。先把问题拆成一个卡分点、一条诊断证据和一个下一版重写目标。问题越小,重写越容易真正聚焦。
IELTS Writing common mistakes
雅思写作常见错误包括偏题、展开薄、连接混乱、词义不准和语法重复错误。先找主卡分点。先把问题拆成一个卡分点、一条诊断证据和一个下一版重写目标。问题越小,重写越容易真正聚焦。
Sentence patterns
雅思写作句型训练应围绕因果、让步、对比和条件关系,而不是背固定长句。先把范文、模板句、审题、逻辑、词汇或语法问题连接到一个可重写验证的步骤。重点不是背一个答案。
Writing software
雅思写作软件应帮助记录主卡分点、证据、短修复和重写变化,而不只是提供单次润色。先把练习、评分、批改或工具结果接到一篇真实作文的诊断和下一版重写。入口越多,越需要一个清楚的主卡分点。
Chinese stuck at 6.5
雅思写作卡 6.5 时,先诊断反复拖分的卡分点:立场、展开、衔接、词汇准确性或语法控制。换更多题目可能暴露更多场景,但如果每篇都重复同一个问题,新的题目不会自动改变卡分点。
Start practising

Use one real essay to find the main blocker.

Submit the prompt and essay, find the criterion that most affects the score, then decide which paragraph to rewrite.