Banfen Writing
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Writing problem breakdown

IELTS Writing starts with task structure, not advanced sentences.

Break the problem into one blocker, one piece of diagnostic evidence, and one next revision target first. The smaller the problem, the more focused the rewrite becomes.

Make the problem smaller first so the rewrite can actually focus.

Common mistake

Starting with sentence patterns can make the essay look complete while task response, overview, or development remains thin.

Diagnostic evidence

If you can write many sentences but cannot name each paragraph role, the problem is usually structural.

What to confirm before writing

Confirm task type, prompt demand, target band, and each paragraph role first.

What to revise in the next version

Write a four-line skeleton: task action, overall judgement, two paragraph roles, and one revision target.

  • Whether task type is clear
  • Whether paragraph roles are clear
  • Whether sentences serve the structure
Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南:小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍,大作文题型、立场与主体段展开,以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时,分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文,判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点,引用对应句段,再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改,才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Chinese Task 2 outline
雅思大作文提纲可以提前发现偏题、立场漂移和展开太薄的问题。先把雅思写作问题落到一个可诊断、可重写验证的写作步骤上。重点不是收集更多模板,而是知道下一版先修哪里。
Chinese Task 1 overview
雅思小作文 overview 不是报最高最低。先概括全图趋势、最大差异和异常点,再决定哪些数字进主体段;适合 6.0–7.0 同学检查是否把总览写成了细节清单。
Writing practice online
IELTS writing practice online 不应刷题和提交。每次练习保留题目、作文与主卡分点,并完成 submit、diagnose、rewrite、compare 四步。先做短修复,聚焦最影响 TA/TR、CC、LR 或 GRA 的问题;对照重写前后证据判断是否改善,再进入新题,避免同类错误反复出现。
Score-gap repair plan
雅思写作备考不要平均刷题。先用一次诊断确定主卡分点,再安排短修复、同题重写和对比复盘。每天随便写一篇,可能只是让旧错误重复得更稳。先用一篇作文确定当前主卡分点,再设置一周重写目标。
Chinese Lexical Resource
雅思写作 Lexical Resource 不等于高级词数量。先检查词义、搭配、改写和话题适配。如果关键词被反复误用,或者 paraphrase 改掉题意,LR 会拖住整篇。
IELTS Writing linking words
雅思写作连接词不是越多越好。先判断相邻句子之间是真正的因果、结果、转折、让步、例证、递进还是比较,再选择 however、therefore 等准确标记关系。若删掉连接词后句序仍然混乱,问题通常在观点推进或段落功能;应先重写 topic sentence 与下一句的逻辑,再精简多余连接词,并检查整段是否自然连贯。
Start practising

Use one real essay to find the main blocker.

Submit the prompt and essay, find the criterion that most affects the score, then decide which paragraph to rewrite.