Common mistake
More essays without diagnosis repeat the same blocker.
- Whether a full essay is used
- Whether a criterion is located
- Whether it leads to a revision step
Judge whether the tool result can become a verifiable revision step. The point is not a score promise; it is whether the result names the main blocker, essay evidence, and next-version target.
A tool becomes useful only when it connects to your next essay version.
If diagnosis cannot place the issue under TR, CC, LR, or GRA, it is not concrete enough.
Choose a recent full Task 1 or Task 2 response, not isolated sentences.
After diagnosis, do one short repair step or paragraph rewrite to verify the main blocker.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
More essays without diagnosis repeat the same blocker.
Judge whether the tool result can become a verifiable revision step. The point is not a score promise; it is whether the result names the main blocker, essay evidence, and next-version target.
If diagnosis cannot place the issue under TR, CC, LR, or GRA, it is not concrete enough.
Choose a recent full Task 1 or Task 2 response, not isolated sentences. More essays without diagnosis repeat the same blocker.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.