Common mistake
Chasing advanced language may improve the look of LR while TR or CC remains around 6.
Writing problem breakdown
To reach band 7, identify the highest-risk criterion first.
Break the problem into one blocker, one piece of diagnostic evidence, and one next revision target first. The smaller the problem, the more focused the rewrite becomes.
Make the problem smaller first so the rewrite can actually focus.
Diagnostic evidence
If one criterion clearly lags, the revision route should start there.
What to confirm before writing
Run a rough four-criterion diagnosis: response, coherence, vocabulary, grammar.
What to revise in the next version
Rewrite one paragraph from the same prompt and prove whether the target blocker criterion changed.
- Whether four criteria are balanced
- Whether the main blocker is clear
- Whether revision changes the signal
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Band 6 to 7
IELTS Writing 从 Band 6/6.5 到 7，先用一篇真实作文诊断立场、展开、衔接或语法清晰度的主卡分点，再重写一段。带着原文完成检查，再用重写验证是否真的改善。
Chinese stuck at 6.5
雅思写作卡 6.5 时，先诊断反复拖分的卡分点：立场、展开、衔接、词汇准确性或语法控制。换更多题目可能暴露更多场景，但如果每篇都重复同一个问题，新的题目不会自动改变卡分点。
Checker vs correction
雅思写作检查器常用于快速定位问题，批改应进一步给出原文证据和下一版重写目标。先把话题、范文、素材或预测题转成审题、展开、例子和重写步骤。重点不是背答案，而是写出自己的下一版。
Chinese coherence
雅思写作连贯要先检查段落顺序、句间推进和指代清楚，而不是堆 however 和 moreover。连接词很多但逻辑没有推进，会让文章像拼贴。
Start practising
Use one real essay to find the main blocker.
Submit the prompt and essay, find the criterion that most affects the score, then decide which paragraph to rewrite.
References