Common mistake
Only fixing grammar makes sentences smoother while Task Response or Coherence can still hold the score back.
- Whether task type is separated
- Whether it finds the main blocker
- Whether ghostwriting is avoided
Judge whether the tool result can become a verifiable revision step. The point is not a score promise; it is whether the result names the main blocker, essay evidence, and next-version target.
A tool becomes useful only when it connects to your next essay version.
If the checker does not distinguish Task 1 and Task 2, it can focus on the wrong thing.
State task type, prompt, essay, and the issue you worry about most.
Use the checker result to rewrite the same paragraph instead of replacing the whole essay.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Only fixing grammar makes sentences smoother while Task Response or Coherence can still hold the score back.
Judge whether the tool result can become a verifiable revision step. The point is not a score promise; it is whether the result names the main blocker, essay evidence, and next-version target.
If the checker does not distinguish Task 1 and Task 2, it can focus on the wrong thing.
State task type, prompt, essay, and the issue you worry about most. Only fixing grammar makes sentences smoother while Task Response or Coherence can still hold the score back.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.