What to confirm first
Split the sample into introduction, body 1, body 2, and conclusion.
Writing step diagnosis
The most useful part of a Task 2 sample is the development chain.
Connect the sample, template sentence, prompt-analysis, logic, vocabulary, or grammar issue to one step that can be verified through rewriting. The point is not memorising one answer.
Chinese long-tail pages need concrete writing steps so they do not become thin content.
Common mistake
Copying high-score expressions may not preserve the logic order and task response.
Diagnostic evidence
If body paragraphs lack reason, example, and implication, the sample is not ready to imitate.
How to revise the next version
Rewrite one body paragraph for the same prompt, keeping the logic move but using your own content.
- Whether position is stable
- Whether body paragraphs develop
- Whether conclusion repeats too much
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Task 2 sample essay analysis
雅思大作文范文分析不该停在高级词和漂亮句型。先检查 thesis、topic sentence、reason、example 与 consequence 是否形成完整链条，并观察每段怎样回应命令词和稳定立场。再用范文的结构证据反查自己的提纲与作文，定位最薄弱的审题或展开步骤，完成一次自己的段落重写。
Task 2 body paragraph
雅思大作文主体段要有清楚 topic sentence、reason、example 和回扣，不要堆多个半展开观点。一段塞三个观点，每个都只写一句，会让展开很薄。
Chinese Task 2 examples
雅思大作文例子要连接 reason 和 consequence，避免只列名人、国家或个人经历。先写 claim 和 reason，再决定例子。不要先找例子再硬套观点。
Chinese sample essay problem
雅思大作文范文可以帮助理解结构，但照搬会掩盖自己的主卡分点。先用范文反查论证步骤。只背范文会让你以为素材够了，但自己的 topic sentence 和 example 仍然断开。
Task 2 score checker
雅思大作文评分应结合完整题目和作文，解释 TR、CC、LR、GRA，而不只是预测总分。重点检查是否回应命令词、立场是否稳定、主体段 reason-example-so what 是否展开，并引用原文证据。找到最影响目标分的一项后，把它转成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，再比较修改前后的具体变化是否清楚。
Start practising
Use one essay to locate the main blocker first.
Submit the prompt and essay, inspect criteria, essay evidence, and the next rewrite target first, then decide whether to train sample analysis, template sentences, logic, or language control.
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