What to confirm before writing
Circle command words such as agree/disagree, discuss, advantages, and problems/solutions.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then revision; repair one step before writing the next essay.
Many band-6 essays are not expression failures; they write discussion as opinion or problem-solution as generic advice.
If the introduction does not answer the command word, the whole structure can be wrong from paragraph one.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Circle command words such as agree/disagree, discuss, advantages, and problems/solutions.
Write four thesis statements for one topic under four question types and observe answer-requirement changes.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Many band-6 essays are not expression failures; they write discussion as opinion or problem-solution as generic advice.
If the introduction does not answer the command word, the whole structure can be wrong from paragraph one. Write four thesis statements for one topic under four question types and observe answer-requirement changes.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit the prompt and outline to check whether structure is wrong.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.