Diagnostic evidence
If the same feedback repeats, rewrite one step first instead of collecting templates.
Chinese writing problem diagnosis
Before using a question bank, know which answer requirement each prompt tests.
This Chinese search usually wants a fast answer about where an essay loses marks. Useful feedback turns vague comments into one executable revision task.
Use essay evidence to choose the next revision.
Common risk
One environment topic can test responsibility, solution, comparison, or opinion.
What to revise after checking
Write one task diagnosis before thesis and two topic sentences.
Identify the writing problem first
Separate task response, development, coherence, vocabulary, and grammar first. Each writing problem needs its own fix.
- Whether prompt type is identified
- Whether topic angle is limited
- Whether outline serves the question
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时，band、错误清单和自动生成的范文只是表层。检查器应基于题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤；结果是学习诊断，官方 IELTS 分数以考试为准。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Education topic
IELTS Task 2 education topic 常见问题在于 reason、example 和 consequence 还要连成可评分的论证，观点往往是有的。
Climate change responsibility
气候变化政府和个人责任题要先诊断 action scale、policy power 和 personal behaviour。先做题目诊断，再写完整作文。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Chinese Task 2 question types
雅思大作文题型包括观点、讨论双方、优缺点、问题解决和双问题。先识别 agree/disagree、discuss、outweigh 等命令词与必须完成的任务，再决定立场与段落职责，避免把 discussion 写成单边 opinion，或让 solution 变成口号。提交题目与提纲后，诊断结构是否选错，重写关键步骤。
Task 2 reasons and examples
百搭理由可以用，但要先回到题目里的对象和动词，改成只属于这道题的理由。这里给 3 个从题目里找理由的办法，并用议事局第一关练一遍。背来的素材要改成证明观点的句子，段落才是在论证。
Task 2 sample essay
雅思大作文范文要重点分析立场稳定、主体段展开和例子如何支撑观点。先把范文、模板句、审题、逻辑、词汇或语法问题连接到一个可重写验证的步骤。重点不是背一个答案。
Start practising
Diagnose one essay and find one main blocker first.
Submit your Task 2 essay and get one piece of diagnostic evidence plus one revision target.
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