Diagnostic evidence
If the overview does not state linear/cyclical process or main stages, Task 1 response weakens.
Writing problem breakdown
Process diagrams start with stages before steps.
What should you write first in a process diagram? Do not translate every arrow immediately. Decide whether it is linear, cyclical, or natural, mark the start, end, key transformations, and groupable stages, then write the overview before stage-by-stage details.
Make the problem smaller first so the rewrite can actually focus.
Common mistake
Translating every step one by one makes the response fragmented and hides main stages.
What to revise in the next version
Rewrite the overview and first stage, controlling passive voice and sequencing language.
What to confirm before writing
Count steps, merge them into two to four stages, and decide whether the process is cyclical.
- Whether stages are grouped
- Whether sequence is clear
- Whether voice is controlled
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Chinese process diagram
雅思小作文流程图要先找起点、终点、阶段、循环和被动语态使用位置。先把雅思写作问题落到一个可诊断、可重写验证的写作步骤上。重点不是收集更多模板，而是知道下一版先修哪里。
Process diagram
IELTS Task 1 process diagram 要先分阶段，按箭头写步骤只是第一层。先分阶段、找起点终点和循环，overview 才会清楚。
Process vocabulary
IELTS Task 1 process vocabulary 要先表达阶段、顺序、被动语态和循环关系。把流程图写成散点描述，会让读者看不出输入、转化和输出。
Process sample
雅思小作文流程图范文要示范阶段划分、被动语态和顺序连接，避免漏步骤或乱顺序。先数清步骤，按 preparation、processing、final output 分阶段。
Task 1 sample report
雅思小作文范文应重点学习 overview、关键数据筛选和比较关系，而不是堆图表词汇。先把范文、模板句、审题、逻辑、词汇或语法问题连接到一个可重写验证的步骤。重点不是背一个答案。
Task 1 sample report analysis
雅思小作文范文分析不应只背描述句型，而要拆解 overview 如何概括全图、主体段怎样分组、每个数字为何被选择，以及比较句如何支持主要趋势。先标出总览、两组数据和极值或显著差异，再用新图表复用分组方法而不是整句；对照自己的报告，定位数据取舍、比较关系或句子准确性中的主卡分点，并形成下一版重写目标。
Start practising
Use one real essay to find the main blocker.
Submit the prompt and essay, find the criterion that most affects the score, then decide which paragraph to rewrite.
References