Diagnostic evidence
If the report lacks proportion language such as majority, minority, share, and account for, Lexical Resource is limited.
Task 1 chart judgement
Pie chart samples turn percentages into relationships.
Turn the chart type into an overview, data selection, comparisons, and sentence control first. The goal is not memorising one sample; it is knowing what this chart needs most.
Decide which relationship the chart requires first, then choose the figures and language that support the overview.
Common mistake
Only listing percentages reads like copying a table and hides the main change.
How to revise the next version
Rewrite two data sentences as share relationships and change relationships.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to confirm before writing
Find the largest share, smallest share, and the category with the clearest change between pie charts first.
- Whether share relationships are clear
- Whether changes have direction
- Whether percentages are selected
FAQ
What problem does Pie chart sample solve?
Turn the chart type into an overview, data selection, comparisons, and sentence control first. The goal is not memorising one sample; it is knowing what this chart needs most.
What evidence should I check first for Pie chart sample?
Only listing percentages reads like copying a table and hides the main change.
What should I redo after reading Pie chart sample?
Rewrite two data sentences as share relationships and change relationships. Find the largest share, smallest share, and the category with the clearest change between pie charts first.
Is Pie chart sample an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Chinese Task 1 overview
雅思小作文 overview 要概括主要趋势、最大差异和异常点，避免写成数据列表。
Chinese Task 1 template
雅思小作文模板只能帮你表达，不能替你选择 overview、关键数据和比较关系。
Task 1 overview template
雅思小作文 Overview 模板只能帮助组织表达，不能替代对图表整体特征的判断。先找最高与最低、主要趋势、最大差异、交叉点或异常值，再选择能承载这些信息的句型。写完后删除不来自图表的空话，并检查总览是否覆盖全图、避免堆具体数字、能统领后续分组；最后用另一张图重写一次，验证方法可以迁移而不是只会套句。
Task 1 comparison sentences
雅思小作文比较句要把数据按相似、差异、极值、排名或变化幅度成组表达，而不是逐个数字写成清单。先确定比较对象与尺度，再选择 while、whereas、compared with 或倍数结构，并核对数字关系。结合 overview 检查每组比较为何重要，把两个孤立数据句合并成有信息量的句子，再用新图表验证分组方法。
Pie chart
IELTS Task 1 pie chart 饼图写作要突出最大与最小占比、类别排名、比例差距和跨时期变化，而不是把所有百分比逐项写完。学习先在 overview 概括整体分布，再按可比较类别组织细节，用少量关键数据证明关系。提交报告后，检查数据选择、分组、比较句和数字准确性，确定下一版最该重写的部分。
Task 1 multiple charts
IELTS Task 1 multiple charts 要先诊断两个图之间的关系、共同趋势和可比较数据。
Chinese process diagram
雅思小作文流程图要先找起点、终点、阶段、循环和被动语态使用位置。
How to write process diagram
雅思小作文流程图要先判断是线性、循环还是自然过程，再识别起点、终点、主要阶段和关键转化。用 overview 概括整体路径，按阶段组织细节，并在需要时准确使用被动语态和顺序连接。避免逐步翻译导致文章破碎；提交报告后，检查阶段分组、漏步和句子控制，确定下一版最该重写的部分，并验证是否表达更清楚和迁移。
Process sample
雅思小作文流程图范文要示范阶段划分、被动语态和顺序连接，避免漏步骤或乱顺序。
Start diagnosis
Turn the chart type into scoreable report actions first.
After submitting a Task 1 report, inspect the overview, key data, comparisons, and sentence accuracy first, then decide whether to rewrite the overview, data sentences, or linking.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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