What to confirm before writing
Label each data relationship as gap, rank, similarity, or proportion first.
Task 1 chart judgement
Comparison sentence patterns need a real comparison first.
Turn the chart type into an overview, data selection, comparisons, and sentence control first. The goal is not memorising one sample; it is knowing what this chart needs most.
Decide which relationship the chart requires first, then choose the figures and language that support the overview.
Common mistake
Forcing while or whereas without a data relationship makes sentences complex but unclear.
Diagnostic evidence
Effective comparison sentences state how much higher A is than B, where they are similar, or how they rank.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
How to revise the next version
Use one data set to write one whereas, one compared with, and one twice as much as sentence.
- Whether pattern matches relationship
- Whether ratios and gaps are accurate
- Whether comparisons appear in groups
FAQ
What problem does Comparison sentence patterns solve?
Turn the chart type into an overview, data selection, comparisons, and sentence control first. The goal is not memorising one sample; it is knowing what this chart needs most.
What evidence should I check first for Comparison sentence patterns?
Forcing while or whereas without a data relationship makes sentences complex but unclear.
What should I redo after reading Comparison sentence patterns?
Effective comparison sentences state how much higher A is than B, where they are similar, or how they rank. Use one data set to write one whereas, one compared with, and one twice as much as sentence.
Is Comparison sentence patterns an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Chinese Task 1 overview
雅思小作文 overview 要概括主要趋势、最大差异和异常点，避免写成数据列表。
Chinese Task 1 template
雅思小作文模板只能帮你表达，不能替你选择 overview、关键数据和比较关系。
Task 1 overview template
雅思小作文 Overview 模板只能帮助组织表达，不能替代对图表整体特征的判断。先找最高与最低、主要趋势、最大差异、交叉点或异常值，再选择能承载这些信息的句型。写完后删除不来自图表的空话，并检查总览是否覆盖全图、避免堆具体数字、能统领后续分组；最后用另一张图重写一次，验证方法可以迁移而不是只会套句。
Task 1 comparison sentences
雅思小作文比较句要把数据按相似、差异、极值、排名或变化幅度成组表达，而不是逐个数字写成清单。先确定比较对象与尺度，再选择 while、whereas、compared with 或倍数结构，并核对数字关系。结合 overview 检查每组比较为何重要，把两个孤立数据句合并成有信息量的句子，再用新图表验证分组方法。
Task 1 comparison
IELTS Task 1 comparison 的关键是把相关项目放在一起比较。只按顺序描述每个数字，通常会让 overview 和主特征变弱。
Task 1 data selection
IELTS Academic Task 1 数据选择决定报告是否真正回应图表。学习如何从折线图、柱状图、表格或饼图中识别主趋势、极值、交叉点和关键分组，先写有信息量的 overview，再用有限数据支持比较。结合常见漏选与逐点复述案例，检查自己的报告最该重写总览句、数据句还是段落分组，并验证是否改善。
Chinese Task 1 correction
雅思小作文批改要先看 overview、关键数据选择和比较句，而不是只改模板句。
Data description
雅思小作文数据描述不是把所有数字依次写完。先从图表中选择主趋势、极值、交叉点、显著差距和可比较分组，在 overview 概括整体关系，再用有限关键数据支持正文。结合折线图、柱状图、表格和饼图常见错误，检查自己的报告是数据取舍、比较关系还是句子准确性最拖分，并确定下一版重写目标，验证证据变化是否改善。
Start diagnosis
Turn the chart type into scoreable report actions first.
After submitting a Task 1 report, inspect the overview, key data, comparisons, and sentence accuracy first, then decide whether to rewrite the overview, data sentences, or linking.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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