Diagnostic evidence
After the revision, five plain-language outcomes including improved and partly improved explain what changed in the target issue.
The report separates TR, CC, LR, and GRA, then uses essay evidence to choose one main blocker; the target paragraph is rewritten in 60–180 words in about eight minutes.
The band range is diagnostic guidance, not an official IELTS score; no score improvement is promised.
The main blocker, target paragraph, and public repair focus sit in one route, leaving one focused revision to complete.
Rewrite the target paragraph around the published repair focus, then check the before/after summary.
After the revision, five plain-language outcomes including improved and partly improved explain what changed in the target issue.
Submit the full prompt and essay so the diagnosis can inspect task response, coherence, vocabulary, and grammar together.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target.