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Task 2 bottleneck

A common Task 2 problem: the idea stops at the opening claim when it needs to grow into an argument.

Many Band 6.0-6.5 writers can write a topic sentence. The paragraph fails afterward: the claim is there, sometimes the example is there, and the reasoning step is missing, so the paragraph stops too early.

This is often misread as weak or simple ideas. More often, the idea still needs to grow into a development chain that earns marks.

The idea is relevant, but the support is too short

The paragraph has a position, but the explanation ends after one thin line.

An example with the reasoning missing

An example appears; the writer still needs to explain why it supports the claim.

There are many linking words, but little progression

The paragraph sounds connected, but the information stays in one place.

Why it caps Task Response

Task 2 asks the writer to develop a position into an argument the reader can follow. Missing that chain, the essay feels directionally correct but underpowered.

Revise paragraph development

When the blocker is development depth, more full timed essays are often inefficient. The shorter route is to rewrite one body paragraph at a time and complete the claim, reason, example, consequence chain.

  • Start with the claim
  • Then explain why it holds
  • Then support it with an example or consequence

Where diagnosis should route next

If the system identifies a weak support chain, the next step should be a body paragraph development repair rather than another full essay on a new prompt.

Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

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Task 1 overview
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Why AI scores stick at 6.5
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First verify whether the support chain is too thin.

If Task 2 feels relevant yet short of Band 7, the gap is often development.

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