Draft risk
Measures are listed without mechanism: who pays, who changes travel behaviour, and why congestion falls are unclear.
- Keep one actor per solution
- Write the behaviour change
- Replace better with a concrete result
Common writing problem
Cities should build more roads, and people should drive less, so traffic will be better.
This draft type may seem to have ideas while lacking diagnostic evidence. Diagnose the writing step first instead of looking for a model essay to memorise.
This illustrates a common writing problem for study; official IELTS scores come only from the test.
Revision target
Change it into one actor chain: the government raises parking fees and shifts commuters toward more reliable public transport.
Find where the chain breaks first
Check whether topic sentence, reason, example, and consequence serve the same answer.
Repair one step in the rewrite
Repair one paragraph first. Turn the sentence that most affects meaning into a provable cause-effect, comparison, or trade-off chain.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Transport topic
IELTS Task 2 transport topic 容易只写 more buses。先诊断公共交通、私家车、拥堵和政策结果链。先诊断题目角度，再决定例子。
Idea development
有 idea 不一定有结果：Task 2 主体段要把观点写成解释、例子和结果。按 claim→reason→example 查断点，再把最空的一句改成可评分论证。
Traffic congestion solutions
交通拥堵方案题要诊断 government action、driver behaviour、public transport 和 pricing policy。
Urbanisation topic
IELTS Task 2 urbanisation topic 容易泛写 big cities。先诊断人口迁移、住房、就业和公共服务压力。
Transport no mechanism
示范 transport essay 只写政府多投资为什么不够，以及如何补上通勤行为变化。检查重点：服务改善是否具体、通勤者是否改变选择、拥堵结果是否可解释。
Urbanisation vague problem
示范 urbanisation essay 把城市问题写成清单时，如何缩小到住房或公共服务压力。检查重点：问题是否缩小、受影响群体是否明确、后果是否有因果链。
Children advertising unclear cause
儿童广告作文常说广告有害但没有解释说服机制。先诊断年龄、产品和购买压力。这类草稿看似有观点，却缺少诊断证据。先诊断写作步骤，不要先找可背范文。
Start practising
Diagnose whether your draft has this blocker too.
Submit one Task 2 essay and let diagnosis locate one main blocker first.
References