What to confirm before writing
Split the solution into actor, rule, incentive or penalty, and expected behaviour first.
Common writing problem
A recycling-law solution must have an enforcement mechanism.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
This illustrates a common writing problem for study; official IELTS scores come only from the test.
Common risk
The draft says government should make laws but does not explain who enforces, how penalties work, or how households change behaviour.
Diagnostic evidence
If the solution has no action verb after removing should, the mechanism is usually missing.
What to revise after checking
Rewrite one solution chain so each step can be enforced or observed.
- Whether enforcement actor appears
- Whether behaviour-change path is clear
- Whether result returns to waste reduction
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Recycling laws
Recycling laws 题要诊断 individual behaviour、government regulation、enforcement 和 habit formation。
Problem solution questions
IELTS Task 2 problem solution questions 要检查 problem、cause、solution 与 actor 是否对应。避免描述现象后提出空泛口号；方案应说明谁执行、如何改变行为、解决哪个原因及结果。提交提纲或作文后，定位对应关系和证据缺口，再把它收窄成可验证的修改步骤。
Environment topic
IELTS Task 2 environment topic 常卡在 government、individual、company 的责任还要拆清。先诊断责任链再重写。
Science funding no public benefit
示范 science funding essay 为什么只写 science important 不够，以及如何连接公共资金和社会收益。带着原文完成检查，再用重写验证是否真的改善。
Screen time vague example
示范 screen time essay 如何把 phones are bad 改成可证明的学习或健康风险。检查重点：内容类型是否明确、行为变化是否具体、后果是否扣题。
Sports weak example
示范 sports essay 为什么健康例子不能自动证明教育或公共资金观点。这不是 Band 9 范文。先看一类 Task 2 草稿为什么卡住，以及下一版应该先修哪一个写作步骤。
Start practising
Check whether your solution also lacks mechanism.
Submit a problem-solution paragraph and locate the broken point in the solution chain first.
References