Find where the chain breaks first
Check whether topic sentence, reason, example, and consequence serve the same answer.
Common writing problem
When education comparison lacks a standard, both sides have ideas but the answer is unclear.
This Task 2 draft type may seem to have ideas while still lacking clear diagnostic evidence. Diagnose the writing step first instead of looking for a model essay to memorise.
This illustrates a common writing problem for study; official IELTS scores come only from the test.
Draft risk
One paragraph discusses employment, another interest, and the conclusion social status, so the comparison standard is unclear.
Revision target
The revision target is choosing employability or personal development first, then aligning both paragraphs.
Repair one step in the rewrite
Repair one paragraph first. Turn the sentence that most affects meaning into a provable cause-effect, comparison, or trade-off chain.
- Whether comparison standard appears
- Whether both paragraphs use the same standard
- Whether conclusion returns to the standard
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Education topic
IELTS Task 2 education topic 常见问题在于 reason、example 和 consequence 还要连成可评分的论证，观点往往是有的。
Idea development
有 idea 不一定有结果：Task 2 主体段要把观点写成解释、例子和结果。按 claim→reason→example 查断点，再把最空的一句改成可评分论证。
University vocational education
大学教育和职业教育题要诊断 labour market、personal development 和 public funding 标准。
Education thin development
一个 IELTS Task 2 education 常见写作问题：展示主卡分点、证据和下一版重写目标，范文由你自己写。这是一类常见写作问题的示例，供学习参考；雅思成绩以官方为准。
Globalisation broad example
示范 IELTS Task 2 globalisation 作文为什么例子太泛，以及如何把文化影响写成可证明链条。先改一段，不急着重写整篇。把最薄的句子改成可证明的因果或比较链。
Internet control position conflict
互联网监管作文容易同时支持自由和全面监管。先诊断边界、对象和权利成本。这类草稿看似有观点，却缺少诊断证据。先诊断写作步骤，不要先找可背范文。
Start practising
Diagnose whether your draft has this blocker too.
Submit one Task 2 essay and let diagnosis locate one main blocker first.
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