What to confirm before writing
Choose one shared standard first, such as fairness, cost, or effectiveness.
Common writing problem
A one-sided discussion essay usually lacks a comparison criterion first.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
This illustrates a common writing problem for study; official IELTS scores come only from the test.
Common risk
The draft develops one side fully and mentions the other in one sentence, so it cannot satisfy discuss both views.
Diagnostic evidence
If your opinion cannot explain why one side is stronger, the discussion remains a list.
What to revise after checking
Rewrite the weaker side topic sentence and reason so it becomes comparable.
- Whether both views are developed
- Whether comparison standard is shared
- Whether personal opinion has a reason
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Discussion essay
IELTS Task 2 discussion essay 要先拆 both views、your opinion 和比较标准，避免只写一边。
Discuss both views
IELTS Task 2 discuss both views 题需要讨论双方并给出判断。只把两边观点各写一段，常常还差一个判断。两边都要认真展开，你偏好的一边和另一边篇幅相当。
Sample answer diagnosis
IELTS writing sample answer diagnosis 把样答案例转成 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical 和 Grammar 的诊断证据与重写步骤。
Education missing comparison standard
示范 university vs vocational education 作文为什么需要稳定比较标准。先改一段，不急着重写整篇。把最影响理解的一句改成可证明的因果、比较或取舍链。
Education thin development
一个 IELTS Task 2 education 常见写作问题：展示主卡分点、证据和下一版重写目标，范文由你自己写。这是一类常见写作问题的示例，供学习参考；雅思成绩以官方为准。
Globalisation broad example
示范 IELTS Task 2 globalisation 作文为什么例子太泛，以及如何把文化影响写成可证明链条。先改一段，不急着重写整篇。把最薄的句子改成可证明的因果或比较链。
Start practising
Check whether the discussion essay only develops one side.
Submit an outline and see whether both sides are comparable.
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