Common mistake
Fixing grammar can make sentences smoother while the answer still misses the prompt.
- Whether position is stable
- Whether example proves the claim
- Whether conclusion answers the prompt
Turn the tool result into diagnosis, evidence, and the next revision step first. No official score promise and no ghostwritten answer.
Use diagnosis to decide what to revise first.
If topic sentence, reason, example, and consequence do not align, the body paragraph loses marks.
Submit the full Task 2 prompt and essay, and mark the body paragraph you worry about most.
Rewrite one argument chain before language polishing.
Fixing grammar can make sentences smoother while the answer still misses the prompt.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit the prompt and essay to get one main blocker, one evidence sentence, and one revision target first.