Common risk
Memorising model answers can make language look advanced while increasing off-task risk on prompts with different qualifiers.
Model-answer safety page
The useful part of a model answer is diagnostic evidence, not memorisable sentences.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then rewrite; repair one step before writing the next essay.
Diagnostic evidence
If you can memorise sentences but cannot explain why the topic sentence works, the model has not become skill.
What to confirm before writing
Write your own thesis and one topic sentence before reading a model answer, then compare the gap.
What to revise after checking
Extract only one step from the model: concession, comparison, example mechanism, or conclusion response.
- Whether your own version comes first
- Whether a revision step is extracted
- Whether whole-paragraph copying is avoided
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，语法和高级词替换放在后面。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
Sample answer diagnosis
IELTS writing sample answer diagnosis 把样答案例转成 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical 和 Grammar 的诊断证据与重写步骤。
Chinese model answer
雅思写作范文用来分析任务回应、立场、段落功能、展开链和语言选择，而不是整篇背诵后套进新题。先看 thesis、topic sentence、reason、example 与 conclusion 如何共同回答命令词，再用结构证据反查自己的提纲和作文。定位最薄弱的步骤后，完成有目标的段落重写，保留自己的观点与表达。
Education thin development
一个 IELTS Task 2 education 常见写作问题：展示主卡分点、证据和下一版重写目标，范文由你自己写。这是一类常见写作问题的示例，供学习参考；雅思成绩以官方为准。
Writing practice online
IELTS writing practice online 不应刷题和提交。每次练习保留题目、作文与主卡分点，并完成 submit、diagnose、rewrite、compare 四步。先做短修复，聚焦最影响 TA/TR、CC、LR 或 GRA 的问题；对照重写前后证据判断是否改善，再进入新题，避免同类错误反复出现。
Writing score predictor
IELTS writing score predictor 只能作为诊断入口。更关键的是找到分数背后的证据、主卡分点和重写目标。单独的分数数字不能告诉你为什么卡在 6 或 6.5。
Start practising
Diagnose your version before comparing the model.
Submit your own paragraph and see which scoring evidence is missing.
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