Why complex sentences can hurt
Grammatical Range and Accuracy considers both range and accuracy. Complex structures can show ability, but repeated errors reduce clarity.
Many learners try to show complex structures by making sentences longer. If clauses, punctuation, agreement, and reference are unstable, the reader works harder.
Short answer: complexity must sit on accuracy. Stabilise frequent error patterns before adding more range.
Long sentences repeatedly create agreement, clause, or punctuation problems.
The idea is clear until sentences are combined.
The learner rereads generally, but does not check recurring errors.
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Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy considers both range and accuracy. Complex structures can show ability, but repeated errors reduce clarity.
Instead of studying grammar generally, extract the top three recurring errors from the learner's own writing.
If the issue is accuracy, do a sentence-control repair pass: shorten the sentence, repair it, then combine only one structure at a time.
Many learners try to show complex structures by making sentences longer. If clauses, punctuation, agreement, and reference are unstable, the reader works harder.
Long sentences repeatedly create agreement, clause, or punctuation problems.
The idea is clear until sentences are combined. Instead of studying grammar generally, extract the top three recurring errors from the learner's own writing.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
If complex sentences are not lifting the score, diagnose error patterns and sentence control first.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.