From report to revision
Lock one main blocker and its essay location before rewriting the same paragraph, so the revision scope stays clear.
One report gives TR, CC, LR, and GRA criterion scores, then connects the main blocker to essay evidence and a 60–180-word revision; a five-level before-and-after assessment records what changed.
The band range is diagnostic guidance, not an official IELTS score; no score improvement is promised.
Lock one main blocker and its essay location before rewriting the same paragraph, so the revision scope stays clear.
The public sample preserves the original, revision, before-and-after assessment, and evidence for traceability.
Prepare the prompt, full response, and target band so the four-criterion diagnosis can locate evidence in the essay.
Complete one 60–180-word same-paragraph revision focused on the main blocker, then read the before-and-after assessment.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit one Task 1 or Task 2 response and get the main blocker, evidence sentence, and next revision target first.