Banfen Writing
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Score plateau

A Band 6.0-6.5 plateau is usually not solved by writing more essays blindly.

At this level your essays usually answer the question and read clearly, but one area still goes up and down. Find out which one.

In short: find the one problem that costs you most, and fix only that in your next essay.

Many comments: which comes first?

Grammar, word choice and linking all got comments; pick one to fix first in the next essay.

On topic, but thin reasons

The point fits the question; the reason needs one more step: why it holds and for whom.

Clear meaning, uneven sentences

You try longer sentences, linking words and harder words; accuracy still varies.

Why you keep landing on 6.5

Examiners look at four areas: answering the question, how paragraphs move, word choice and grammar. When the score stalls, one of them is usually holding it back.

Note the problem, too

If you only note the score, the next essay repeats the old problem. Add one line: thin reasons, a shifting position, stiff linking, or many sentence errors.

  • Find the area that costs most
  • Circle the sentences that show it
  • Fix only that area next time

What to fix once you know

Stay with this essay. Turn the problem into one small task: rewrite one paragraph of reasons, re-pick the overview points for Task 1, fix one link, or correct one set of sentences.

FAQ
Will writing more essays get me past 6.5?

It helps. A faster route is to find the area that costs you most and fix only that in the next essay.

How do I know which area costs most?

Look at feedback on your last two or three essays. Start with the problem that keeps coming back, and circle the sentences that show it.

Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
How it works
先看这篇作文卡在哪一步、为什么,再决定怎么改。对应公开评分标准,并落到可动手的下一步。一份有用的写作诊断,会先说明哪一步在压分、为什么。分数和改写建议都排在这个判断之后。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起,才能支撑论证。例子出现了,还要说明它怎样支持前一句推理。
Band 6 to 7
IELTS Writing 从 Band 6/6.5 到 7,先用一篇真实作文诊断立场、展开、衔接或语法清晰度的主卡分点,再重写一段。带着原文完成检查,再用重写验证是否真的改善。
Band range diagnosis
IELTS Writing band score checker 给出分数之外,还要说明依据。提交题目和作文后,更值得关注的是保守分数区间、TR/CC/LR/GRA 四项判断、最影响目标分的主卡分点及原文证据。把这些信息转成下一版 修改步骤,用修改前后变化判断反馈是否有效;结果用于学习参考,官方 IELTS 分数以考试为准。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时,分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Start practising

Find the move holding you back.

If you keep scoring around 6.0-6.5, finding the area that costs most helps more than one more essay.