How to break down this topic
First decide whether the prompt asks about city attraction, rural decline, housing pressure, or public services.
Task 2 topic guide
Urbanisation topic essays need migration and public-service pressure before examples.
IELTS Task 2 urbanisation topic prompts often fail not because of missing ideas, but because housing, work, and city services is not turned into a scorable paragraph chain.
Diagnose the prompt angle before choosing examples.
Risk: city problem list
Stacking traffic, housing, and pollution removes a clear causal chain from the paragraph.
Diagnostic evidence: no group difference
If migrant workers, young families, and local residents are all written as people, the argument becomes empty.
What to revise after checking
Choose one group and explain why they move, what limitation they face, and how the result affects the city.
- Whether the group is specific
- Whether the migration motive is clear
- Whether the city outcome is scorable
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估，观点数量是其次。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起，才能支撑论证。例子出现了，还要说明它怎样支持前一句推理。
Work topic
IELTS Task 2 work topic 常见风险是把 remote work、job security、work-life balance 都写成泛泛效率。先诊断对象和因果。
Transport topic
IELTS Task 2 transport topic 容易只写 more buses。先诊断公共交通、私家车、拥堵和政策结果链。先诊断题目角度，再决定例子。
Rural to urban migration
农村到城市迁移题要诊断工作机会、公共服务和农村地区影响，不要只写 people move to cities。检查重点：迁移动机是否明确、城市压力是否具体、农村影响是否出现。
Urbanisation vague problem
示范 urbanisation essay 把城市问题写成清单时，如何缩小到住房或公共服务压力。检查重点：问题是否缩小、受影响群体是否明确、后果是否有因果链。
Arts topic
IELTS Task 2 arts topic 容易只写 art is important。先诊断文化价值、政府预算和可见收益。先诊断题目角度，再决定例子。
Business topic
IELTS Task 2 business topic 常涉及广告、企业责任和消费者选择。先诊断企业、政府和个人边界。先限定角度，再选例子。
Start practising
Check one argument chain in a urbanisation essay first.
Submit one urbanisation topic essay and find the main blocker in task reading, position, or development.
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