How to break down this topic
First decide whether the prompt asks about city attraction, rural decline, housing pressure, or public services.
Task 2 topic guide
Urbanisation topic essays need migration and public-service pressure before examples.
IELTS Task 2 urbanisation topic prompts often fail not because of missing ideas, but because housing, work, and city services is not turned into a scorable paragraph chain.
Diagnose the prompt angle before choosing examples.
Risk: city problem list
Stacking traffic, housing, and pollution removes a clear causal chain from the paragraph.
Diagnostic evidence: no group difference
If migrant workers, young families, and local residents are all written as people, the argument becomes empty.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to revise after checking
Choose one group and explain why they move, what limitation they face, and how the result affects the city.
- Whether the group is specific
- Whether the migration motive is clear
- Whether the city outcome is scorable
FAQ
What problem does Urbanisation topic solve?
IELTS Task 2 urbanisation topic prompts often fail not because of missing ideas, but because housing, work, and city services is not turned into a scorable paragraph chain.
What evidence should I check first for Urbanisation topic?
Stacking traffic, housing, and pollution removes a clear causal chain from the paragraph.
What should I redo after reading Urbanisation topic?
If migrant workers, young families, and local residents are all written as people, the argument becomes empty. Choose one group and explain why they move, what limitation they face, and how the result affects the city.
Is Urbanisation topic an AI essay checker?
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心不是观点数量，而是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起，才能支撑论证。
Work topic
IELTS Task 2 work topic 常见风险是把 remote work、job security、work-life balance 都写成泛泛效率。先诊断对象和因果。
Transport topic
IELTS Task 2 transport topic 容易只写 more buses。先诊断公共交通、私家车、拥堵和政策结果链。
Rural to urban migration
农村到城市迁移题要诊断工作机会、公共服务和农村地区影响，不要只写 people move to cities。
Urbanisation vague problem
示范 urbanisation essay 把城市问题写成清单时，如何缩小到住房或公共服务压力。
Arts topic
IELTS Task 2 arts topic 容易只写 art is important。先诊断文化价值、政府预算和可见收益。
Business topic
IELTS Task 2 business topic 常涉及广告、企业责任和消费者选择。先诊断企业、政府和个人边界。
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Check one argument chain in a urbanisation essay first.
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