IELTS Task 2 transport topic prompts often fail not because of missing ideas, but because commuters, city budgets, and travel choices is not turned into a scorable paragraph chain.
Diagnose the prompt angle before choosing examples.
If every policy is only beneficial and has no budget, access, or fairness issue, the position looks immature.
Ask whether the core issue is congestion, pollution, public spending, or individual freedom.
Turn one transport claim into policy -> commuter choice -> city outcome.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
More buses, trains, and taxes cannot explain lower congestion without behaviour change.
IELTS Task 2 transport topic prompts often fail not because of missing ideas, but because commuters, city budgets, and travel choices is not turned into a scorable paragraph chain.
If every policy is only beneficial and has no budget, access, or fairness issue, the position looks immature.
Ask whether the core issue is congestion, pollution, public spending, or individual freedom. More buses, trains, and taxes cannot explain lower congestion without behaviour change.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit one transport topic essay and find the main blocker in task reading, position, or development.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
