How to break down health topics
First decide whether the prompt is about lifestyle choice, public cost, advertising, school education, or healthcare access, then choose the actor.
Task 2 topic guide
Health-topic essays need to separate personal choice from public policy.
Health prompts often mix diet, exercise, tax, medical cost, and education. The risky version only says people should live healthily and skips who is responsible.
The responsible actor determines the paragraph structure.
Risk: advice is too ordinary
Eat less junk food is only advice; an argument needs more. You need to explain why individuals, schools, companies, or governments can change behaviour.
Diagnostic evidence: missing causal step
If the middle step between the measure and the health outcome is missing, the paragraph feels jumpy.
What to revise after checking
Write one health chain: actor -> intervention -> behaviour change -> health result. Use one sentence for each step.
- Whether responsibility is clear
- Whether the intervention is specific
- Whether the causality is complete
Guides
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These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估，观点数量是其次。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Problem solution
IELTS Task 2 problem solution 题常见风险是问题写一套，方案写另一套。高质量答案需要问题和方案一一对应。问题和方案要成对出现。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起，才能支撑论证。例子出现了，还要说明它怎样支持前一句推理。
Housing topic
IELTS Task 2 housing topic 常涉及房价、城市规划和家庭生活。先诊断 affordability、land use 和居民体验。
Language topic
IELTS Task 2 language topic 涉及儿童外语、全球语言和文化身份。先诊断学习目的和受影响群体。先限定角度，再选例子。
Media topic
IELTS Task 2 media topic 容易泛写 influence。先诊断信息来源、受众和行为改变。这个观点太大，无法说明是改变消费、观点、学习还是投票。
Start practising
Check whether responsibility is clear in a health essay first.
Submit one health-topic essay and find the main issue in responsibility, causality, or examples.
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