Diagnostic evidence: example cannot prove the prompt
If the example only names a food and never connects to health, culture, or economy, support breaks.
Task 2 topic guide
Food topic essays need health, culture, or supply-chain angle before examples.
IELTS Task 2 food topic prompts often fail not because of missing ideas, but because diet habits, overseas food, and public health is not turned into a scorable paragraph chain.
Diagnose the prompt angle before choosing examples.
Risk: only writing health common sense
Fast food is unhealthy stays short without consumer habit or policy action.
What to revise after checking
Turn one food example into habit -> consequence -> task answer.
How to break down this topic
First decide whether the prompt asks about fast food, local food, food safety, family meals, or culture change.
- Whether the prompt angle is singular
- Whether consumer behaviour appears
- Whether the example returns to the prompt
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估，观点数量是其次。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起，才能支撑论证。例子出现了，还要说明它怎样支持前一句推理。
Health topic
IELTS Task 2 health topic 常见问题是把 lifestyle、tax、public health 混在一起。先诊断责任和证据。
Culture topic
IELTS Task 2 culture topic 容易写成 tradition is important。先诊断文化变化、代际差异和具体例子。
Fast food health
快餐健康题要诊断个人责任、政府政策和消费习惯，不要只写 unhealthy。检查重点：责任主体是否明确、健康后果是否具体、措施是否有机制。
Overseas food local food
进口食物和本地食物题要诊断价格、环境、文化和供应稳定性之间的比较标准。把比较写成：标准 -> A 方证据 -> B 方限制 -> 立场。带着原文完成检查，再用重写验证是否真的改善。
Globalisation topic
IELTS Task 2 globalisation topic 容易写成世界变小了。先诊断文化、经济和个人选择之间的影响链。先诊断题目角度，再决定例子。
Government topic
IELTS Task 2 government topic 容易写成 government should do more。先诊断政策目标、预算取舍和结果链。
Start practising
Check one argument chain in a food essay first.
Submit one food topic essay and find the main blocker in task reading, position, or development.
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