Common risk
Only writing companies should be responsible does not define where responsibility ends.
Task 2 topic guide
Business topic essays need business responsibility and consumer behaviour.
IELTS Task 2 business topic prompts often turn advertising, profit, and social responsibility into a common-sense list instead of a scorable argument chain.
Limit the angle before choosing examples.
Diagnostic evidence
If one paragraph asks companies, government, and consumers to change at once, responsibility becomes confused.
How to break down this topic
First decide whether the prompt asks about advertising ethics, consumer protection, profit, or public interest.
What to revise after checking
Write one responsibility chain: actor -> decision -> consumer impact -> social result.
- Whether the responsible actor is singular
- Whether business motive is explained
- Whether social result can be proven
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估，观点数量是其次。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起，才能支撑论证。例子出现了，还要说明它怎样支持前一句推理。
Money topic
IELTS Task 2 money topic 容易从 happiness 写到 success 再写到 consumerism。先诊断立场和比较标准。
Online shopping local shops
网购和本地商店题要诊断 consumer convenience、small business 和 community impact。先做题目诊断，再写完整作文。
Children topic
IELTS Task 2 children topic 常把 children 写得太大。先诊断年龄段、责任主体和行为变化。年龄段决定原因和例子。
Crime topic
IELTS Task 2 crime topic 容易写成 punishment 清单。先诊断原因、责任主体和 solution 机制。solution 要有机制，不只是态度正确。
Culture topic
IELTS Task 2 culture topic 容易写成 tradition is important。先诊断文化变化、代际差异和具体例子。
Start practising
Check one business topic essay first.
Submit one Task 2 essay and see which layer, task reading, position, or development, is holding it back.
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