Common trap
Only writing flexible working is convenient without explaining output change.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with a model essay. First check who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Only writing flexible working is convenient without explaining output change.
Without task type, communication cost, or home distraction, work argument overgeneralizes.
First decide whether the prompt asks about productivity, work-life balance, teamwork, or employer control.
Write one productivity chain: work setting -> behaviour change -> output or team result.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with a model essay. First check who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
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