Common trap
Only writing flexible working is convenient without explaining output change.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with a model essay. First check who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Only writing flexible working is convenient without explaining output change.
Without task type, communication cost, or home distraction, work argument overgeneralizes.
First decide whether the prompt asks about productivity, work-life balance, teamwork, or employer control.
Write one productivity chain: work setting -> behaviour change -> output or team result.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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