Common trap
Only writing students become healthy and ignoring school budget and academic priority.
This IELTS Task 2 question does not need a memorised model essay first. The key is what the prompt compares, who should act, and what result the body paragraph must prove.
Do outline diagnosis before writing the full essay.
Only writing students become healthy and ignoring school budget and academic priority.
If classroom, discipline, or teamwork is missing, the education value is not grounded.
Choose one goal first: health, discipline, teamwork, or stress control.
Turn the school sports claim into activity -> student habit -> learning result.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit your Task 2 essay or outline and get one main blocker plus one revision target.