Pre-draft outline check
Choose a standard first: urban congestion, environmental cost, commuting reliability, or personal freedom. Each paragraph should serve one standard.
Task 2 question
For public transport vs private cars, set the comparison standard before listing pros and cons.
This question easily becomes a list of convenience, cost, and pollution. Task Response depends more on whether the comparison standard serves the prompt.
The comparison standard becomes the paragraph skeleton.
Common trap
One paragraph says public transport is good and another says private cars are good, but no standard explains which is better.
Diagnostic evidence
If the conclusion is only depends on people, the comparison standard is usually missing.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to revise after checking
Rewrite two topic sentences so both carry one comparison word, such as reliable, scalable, or sustainable.
- Whether the comparison standard is clear
- Whether each paragraph compares one point
- Whether the conclusion avoids depends on people
FAQ
What problem does Public transport vs cars solve?
This question easily becomes a list of convenience, cost, and pollution. Task Response depends more on whether the comparison standard serves the prompt.
What evidence should I check first for Public transport vs cars?
One paragraph says public transport is good and another says private cars are good, but no standard explains which is better.
What should I redo after reading Public transport vs cars?
If the conclusion is only depends on people, the comparison standard is usually missing. Rewrite two topic sentences so both carry one comparison word, such as reliable, scalable, or sustainable.
Is Public transport vs cars an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
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These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Environment topic
IELTS Task 2 environment topic 常卡在 government、individual、company 责任没有拆清。先诊断责任链再重写。
Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场不只是开头写同意或反对，还要让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据，再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Coherence
IELTS Coherence and Cohesion 不只是 linking words。更重要的是观点顺序、段落职责、句子推进和指代是否清楚。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Recycling laws
Recycling laws 题要诊断 individual behaviour、government regulation、enforcement 和 habit formation。
Remote work flexibility
Remote work flexibility 题目容易只写方便。先诊断 employee autonomy、company control 和 productivity 的取舍。
Renewable energy investment
Renewable energy investment 题目不能只写政府应该投资。先诊断 investment 如何产生环境、经济或社会结果。
Start diagnosis
Check the comparison standard first.
Submit one transport essay and find the main issue in comparison, position, or coherence.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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