Pre-draft outline check
Choose a standard first: urban congestion, environmental cost, commuting reliability, or personal freedom. Each paragraph should serve one standard.
Task 2 question
For public transport vs private cars, set the comparison standard before listing pros and cons.
This question easily becomes a list of convenience, cost, and pollution. Task Response depends more on whether the comparison standard serves the prompt.
The comparison standard becomes the paragraph skeleton.
Common trap
One paragraph says public transport is good and another says private cars are good, but the standard for judging which is better is missing.
Diagnostic evidence
If the conclusion is only depends on people, the comparison standard is usually missing.
What to revise after checking
Rewrite two topic sentences so both carry one comparison word, such as reliable, scalable, or sustainable.
- Whether the comparison standard is clear
- Whether each paragraph compares one point
- Whether the conclusion avoids depends on people
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Environment topic
IELTS Task 2 environment topic 常卡在 government、individual、company 的责任还要拆清。先诊断责任链再重写。
Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场从开头的同意或反对开始，再让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据，再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Coherence
IELTS Coherence and Cohesion 的范围比 linking words 大得多。更重要的是观点顺序、段落职责、句子推进和指代是否清楚。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Recycling laws
Recycling laws 题要诊断 individual behaviour、government regulation、enforcement 和 habit formation。
Remote work flexibility
Remote work flexibility 题目容易只写方便。先诊断 employee autonomy、company control 和 productivity 的取舍。
Renewable energy investment
Renewable energy investment 题目光写政府应该投资还差得远。先诊断 investment 如何产生环境、经济或社会结果。
Start practising
Check the comparison standard first.
Submit one transport essay and find the main issue in comparison, position, or coherence.
References